thepixelizer's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[SONIC MOVIE THREEEEE!!]

“You’re comparing yourself to me? HA!…I’ll make you eat those words! …to be my fake.”

Good picture, the shading is top notch.

Theicekreammanz responds:

"What you see is what you get! Just a guy that loves adventures!" Thank youu:)

[Yes]

This picture is amazing, I love the clean lines and the vibrant colors!

The only things off are the proportions.

The blue one’s right arm seems to be way too short. It almost looks like it’s withdrawing into the body, usually the upper arm and forearm are the same length.

And the pink one’s fist is really big too.
Is that her super power? If not it should be three times smaller.

RF-Ataraxia responds:

I appreciate the feedback!
This was my first attempt at "extreme" perspective, so I had a tough time figuring out.

[Mighty Astro]

Might want to change his name it sounds like both of Astro Boy’s names. Astro Boy is also known as the Mighty Atom.

His super suit also could use some more love too.
Usually when design a character I always try to make something that makes them stand out in a crowd, fashionable or not.

I take risks and experiment and go through tons of iterations.

It’s a good base but it could be more interesting.

theboxmonkeyboy responds:

Thanks for the input! I'm kind of experimenting with his name a lot but nothing really sticks. I really want his super suit with more detail and a more unique silhouette, but nothing again really stuck so I left it at that. So, I guess I should be going back to the drawing board. Again, thanks for the input!

[Fartnite's Calam]

Wow! Your anatomy has improved a lot since your last piece!

Although the proportions are off on the arm that’s down though, the forearm is a bit too short.
Usually the upper arm and forearm are the same length.

To make it easier to remember I made up a rule that I remind my self with when drawing.

If the hand can’t reach the pocket then the arm is too short.

The only other thing I noticed is that’s a pretty odd way to hold a gun usually the index finger goes rests on the trigger.

Other than those it’s a pretty decent and stylized art piece, good job!

Prismisho responds:

How do I fumble it every single time, thanks for the advice!

[Sheep]

It’s grainy because you didn’t tick the denoise box.

VoidBoids responds:

Nah the mp4 looks fine its just the gif

[i made my own series called sandy the robot inspired in robot jones from cartoon network]

Aw isn’t she adorable!

pinkchang responds:

oh my good finally someone comments here

[Violin Lessons]

The deliverance and punchline needs work, usually there’s the intro to the topic, then there’s the pause, then the punchline happens, then there’s an amplifier or reaction to the punchline.
https://youtu.be/y9i4KwPbe_w

But it has to be surprising, all of your comics I read usually lead up to something that would make sense in a chronological order as the punchline.

A strong punchline usually pulls the rug from right under your feet. You set them up with a quick topic then wham you throw them off guard with a screw ball.

For this one in particular the setup takes too long, she should of started singing by panel 2, then there would be the pause on 3 and then she gets kicked out.

Also since it’s slapstick it would be funnier if it were more violent, with an impact spark
and some sound effect text.
Maybe even some exaggeration like her flying into a trash can on the other side of the street, or flying into a car wind shield, or getting embedded into the side of someone’s house.

Comedy is hard (I should know I’m a comic artist too) But as long as you have a sense of humor that’s all you’ll need.

Dymarob responds:

I appreciate your criticisms, but the comic wasn't meant to be slapstick.

While it would have been funny for the tutor to land in a trash can or through a windshield, the punchline wasn't meant to be her getting hurt, just that she was kicked out for being a bad tutor.

Secondly, a pause wouldn't make any sense for the joke because it cuts away midsentence. Movies and TV do this without a pause all the time.

I'm also not quite sure what you mean by "The setup takes too long" considering that it's a quick 4-panel comic. Maybe it would have worked better as a 3-panel. I'm not sure.

Again, I appreciate your opinion on it, but I don't have many regrets with how I made this comic.

[Teenage robot! (But more robot)]

🎵Jenny oh Jenny🎵

Neat design! The glowing eyes sort of reminds me of Smash Bros Mega Man.

crackheadboi responds:

Actually I can see that

[Tron Gothic City]

Simply amazing! I love the Tron movies so I love this!

DanielBeltranS2 responds:

Thank you so much. I love Tron too, specially Tron: Legacy

[SLUSHY]

Pretty unique oc, I love colors and clean outlines.

NoNthings responds:

Thank you!